Next of kin

Carlos has kept this one short and sweet. Does this approach work better than long copy?

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Subject: Udate me back pls (31-Okt-2005 18:46)
From: Carlos_aberto42@box.az
To: xxx@xxx.xxx

>From Carlos Alberto
My name is Carlos Alberto, I work in a bank, I need your assistance in moving the sum of Six Million Five Hundred Thousand Dollars {$6.5million} into your country.
Funds are ready in account manage by me, On our agreement I will make you next of kin beneficiary of funds and action cash delivery to you.

Kindly reply via below email address for further instruction on how to proceed.
Email - carlo_aberto34@excite.com

Regards,
Carlos Alberto.